Today we had a crit on what we had produced so far on studio brief 2
I presented the boards shown below.
Feedback
I agree with most of the feedback and i feel there was some good ideas put forward, i also think changing the logo like somebody suggested was a good idea, thinking about different ways of overlaying it changing the different colours and whats on top ect. I also agree that the illustration on the signs was too detailed and needed to be simpler. I was really happy with the feedback because everyone said they really liked it and the colour choices were really good and that was something i was worried about.
So things i have to go away and do, make the spokes thicker on the tires, create printed material, create the app and website and create the mock ups using some of the imagery already used.
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