Friday 28 March 2014

Champneys crit

Before we submitted our boards to YCN, me and Ant decided to have our boards looked at by Sean, Dan and Grace to check for any errors there might have been, and at the same time we had a look at theres to check and see if there was any last minute changes needed for the boards.


First board was described as being excellent by Sean, straight away theres a impact drawing the viewer in. 


Next board we needed to make our concept a lot more clear and change some grammatical errors 


Again a few grammar issues 


The page for the website page was good, bold and impactful, showed the website, doesn't need text.


Again grammar issues but again strong imagery used.


Some text issues, and Ant fixed the alignment of the images. 


Again just some grammar and spelling but all sorted, and again we had strong feedback on our imagery. 

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